July 13, 2018 in Book 3: Unwelcome
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snuffysam 13th July 2018 edit delete reply
snuffysam
"You know, tomorrow. The thing that happens when the sun goes up again. How do I know so many words that you don't?"
NiaNook 13th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
*snap snap snap*
Woulda been a perfect retort XD
MST3KFan 13th July 2018 edit delete reply
MST3KFan
First we were seeds in the ground, then flowers, and suddenly hoo-mans! Goodnight.

Seems Tatsuma is trying to think of something to tell Yoriko there at the end...so progress?
NiaNook 13th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Like realizing she should probably be a little nicer to him.
So... progress!
Japster 13th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
Satsuma Tatsuma seems deep in thought. So clearly she knows something. I wonder what she is holding back...
NiaNook 15th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
"once, long ago, I was just a tangerine..."
dubiz senju 14th July 2018 edit delete reply
dubiz senju
Tatsuma's face shows that she remembered something she doesn't want to share. Well,at least her relationship with yoriko has gotten a tad better
NiaNook 15th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
That's true. If she feels kinship with Yokiro, maybe she won't mind sharing as much :)
Japster 15th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
How did you come up with the names for your characters? When I name something it's either semi edgy, way to basic, or a joke...

Also: I really like what you did with Tatsuma's last speech bubble, the flower is a unique touch that makes a lot of sense.

Also also: you should consider getting a discord, or forum if some sort. It's a great way to keep your community involved :)
NiaNook 16th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
They were made up by stringing together syllables that sounded nice together (and resonated with the character). Nothing deep :') You could tell I was watching too much anime with how my brain was stuck on Japanese-sounding syllables, lol. And thank you! The flower hopefully helps you know who's talking.

A discord or forum? Hmm... Never thought about it, but I could look into it if people were actually interested in that sort of thing.
Japster 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
I would be all over that discord. There are some other comics I read that have one, and it makes a really nice community. It'll help keep your readers engaged between updates, and gives you a chance to have a more involved conversation with them. For example, I have a bunch of stuff I want to ask you about the comic but I don't simply because the UI of ComicFury isn't made for it. Discord, on the other hand, is great for that kind of stuff. I really recommend it!
Japster 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
Also: you can set up a bot is Discord to notify everyone when the comic updates
Japster 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
Also Also: Are the things on YouTube cannon? If so: BEWARE SPOILERS!!!
NiaNook 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Thanks for the insight! If I make one, you'll be the first to know. :) I just want to be sure there's enough interest for it to have more than 1-2 people populating it, lol (though I'm more than happy to answer questions in any medium, but, yeah, these comments aren't easy for full-blown discussion)

Oh my gosh, the youtube vids! I need to put spoiler warnings everywhere @_@ The musical ones aren't cannon, but they feature some characters and developments that haven't been introduced yet. Whatever you do, just don't watch those crappy voiceovers. Those were taken straight from the old comic this is rebooted from.
Japster 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
Japster
So is this going to follow the same story, or is it significantly different?
NiaNook 18th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Depends on how much is considered significant. Many major events will be similar, though there's hundreds of alterations such as new characters or things playing out differently. Probably more changes, to come, as inspiration strikes.

(EDIT) Now I'm curious about what you spoiled and think I'm gonna put those voiceovers as 'unlisted' >_>; ahaha
deerwithgoggles 19th July 2018 edit delete reply
deerwithgoggles
tatsuma is definitely my favorite design (and character, i think! they're all so hard to choose between. <3) in this comic, and i love how she's drawn in the second to last panel here.
NiaNook 19th July 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Aw, thanks! c:
And it's not the usual grumpy-face, for once