April 7, 2018 in Book 3: Unwelcome
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes) Rate this comic

Page 3 (Book 3)

Page 3 (Book 3)
<<First Latest>>
Post a Comment

Comments:

snuffysam 7th April 2018 edit delete reply
snuffysam
Huh, has Tatsuma been here already?
NiaNook 7th April 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Hmm...
I'll answer that if it isn't made clear by the end of this storyline/book (unless that is not a rhetorical question.)
snuffysam 8th April 2018 edit delete reply
snuffysam
That was mainly a joking question (as in, tatsuma brings disaster everywhere she goes), but if there's a serious answer i'm excited to hear more about it...
NiaNook 8th April 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Oh. Ha! Did not catch that
(It may not even be relevant, but I'm trying and failing to keep my fat mouth shut for any questions in case it does give something away)
MST3KFan 8th April 2018 edit delete reply
MST3KFan
Poor guy seems to have a lot of things to explain to the flower girls if they're not familiar with tooth brushes and the like.

Of course before that, looks like there's a village in turmoil!
NiaNook 9th April 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Apparently out of everything they know, dental hygiene was not included.
CiciEnixa 8th April 2018 edit delete reply
CiciEnixa
And caught up!

I don't think they need toothbrushes, man. But y'know, good hygiene is always good XD You could also get spare clothes for the journey.

As for the smoke, that's totally not foreboding at all >__> Smoke like that is typically the aftermath of a fire, though, so hopefully nothing's still burning? (Who am I kidding? Go save the villagers!)
NiaNook 9th April 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Hey, maybe even plants get plaque :'D

If I'm not mistaken, the type of smoke is also determined by the material burning, but I'd take your word over mine. Anyway, buckle up, because I'm sure you're going to be able to pick apart all kinds of logical issues with this whole section! 'cause I kept finding fallacies while inking the pages that I didn't know how to fix *sob*

thanks for reading, btw~
CiciEnixa 9th April 2018 edit delete reply
CiciEnixa
The smoke honestly could mean so many things, and even more in a world of plant humans XD I'm just hoping for the best for these three, they have not had a good day since meeting each other.

And a little thing between all us storywriting peeps, donchu worry too much about fallacies and inconsistencies, you just think "my magic world, my magic rules", because you're doing a wonderful job, NiaNook ;P
NiaNook 10th April 2018 edit delete reply
NiaNook
Well... we must try our best to make it make sense, nonetheless. You're too sweet!